As blades spiral;
methodically
like the turmoils of love
Sounds whispering hope
for all whom hear
Sending clandestined wishes
Forevermore
Author notes
PROMPT: Windmill wishes
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE 10/20/10 by jasminerose.
525 points, ended September 2, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed this piece of poetry.
Short and sweet filled wiyh great imagery
Secrets forever very well done congrats
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Nice,
Well done there my friend,
this is beautiful!
Thanks for sharing................
and congrates on the HM.
Peace, Timothy
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Wow
This is beautiful. You made me want to send out some sorry's and hope for a better tomorrow. Good luck in the contest. Hugs~ Cuddles -
A beautiful and befitting take on the prompt! I wish you the best in the comp
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nice,, soft gentle breeze heard in this one..good on you.
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A beautiful take on the prompt given!
Thank you for entering my contest!
Jasminerose
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