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Terrible Love

Damn you terrible love
for tormenting me so
To draw me in and tear out my heart
For killing me mentally for killing me socially
For putting ideas in my head that are not mine
For forcing me to do things I don't want to do
Screw love screw romantics It would never work out
I always and so it shall be that I shall fail and
disappoint and end this terrible thing call love

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  • bamerz
    April 26, 2008
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    that sounds like what my best friend is going through right now she feels the same way


  • Angelflower
    April 8, 2008

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    Wow.. this was really good. and so very true.. Love is a tragic lesson to those that have felt it and makes us all fools... I really liked how intense this was.. Great write..
    Jetleena


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 15, 2007

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    wow. Beautiful. SO TRUE!

    I believe what you wrote is true. Love is a gift and yet a curse. It can take you high and it can take you low. I love the first four lines:
    Damn you terrible love
    for tormenting me so
    To draw me in and tear out my heart
    For killing me mentally for killing me socially"
    very realistic in my heart. good writing!