The words are grinding
I X AM X POWDER
and you fell in love
(with/my/scent)
I'm addicted to ruining lives
\\.\You're addicted to ruining your own/.//
but
you're still drugged up
from the look on my face
when I told you to
//./let. .go/.//
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Written September 20th, 2003
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Oh shit..
this is was awesome stuff. I love the way you got creative with the symbols and such. That's a cool way to express your emotions further. The poem itself was pretty gnarly, too. I hope things are going fine. Keep it flowin'.. PEaCE!
-Britny -
Addicted to ruin. fimilar feeling. lately, it hasn't been so attacthed to me as much. i liked the poem though. err. short on comment material right now, so later.
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you will feel it...deep down in ur pants.
"I'm addicted to ruining lives
\\.\You're addicted to ruining your own/.//"
Man, I know that feeling. Except for me, it's more like, I'm addicted to ruining my own. C'mon, it's what all the cool kids are doing...This was a great write, you come up with the most orginal ways to express yourself. That's what I love the most about you...the fact that you're you. -Jena -
kick arse
interesting use of words
i like it alot
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