Hazy hues linger,
distorting the oceans canvas,
as pretty melodies
soften to winged prayers;
now perching in shelter’s coves
indigo velvet deepens,
while shadows cast a silence~
as she sneaks in
with her tempest charm
Author notes
unaware of storm clouds (Prompt)
pic:http://www.handprint.com/
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF [quickie] by layla..
300 points, ended September 2, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful write! It is short but to the point and thats always hard to do but you did it. And congradulations for winner the silver trophy
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Thank you so much Ebony for such a wonderful compliment on my poem
Short and sweet yes.. but I love a good challenge!
Thank you for the congratulations and for stopping by and reading some of my poetry!
That is so very sweet of you
Linda
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Congratulations Darlin for winning such a lovely trophy! A beautiful write well deserving. Have a wonderful evening, Ken IBT xoxo
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Nice use of words and imagery. I like the swiftness and movement of this piece. Very subtle. Good luck!
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Hello Esha, What a pleasure this has been to be in your contest and thank you so very much for the lovely silver trophy!!!
I just loved the prompt and I am so very honored to be among the winners!!
It is nice to meet you and thank you for having such an inspiring quickie
Linda
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No, thank you for making the judgement thougher for me.
Take care.
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-Esha.
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With your tempest you will blow away many others. Short and strong.
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Thank you so much Sonja for such a wonderful comment on my poem!! Always so nice to hear your thoughts on my poetry!!
Hope you are well my friend
Linda
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Good evening This is definitely a wonderful write with a great choice of wording that takes the reader within the canvas it was meant for. Loved the images you have created. Wishing you the best in the contest, Ken IBT
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