A Requiem for a Dying
A Song to console the Crying
A ballad to stop the tears
A sonnet to banish all the fears
A melody to light the dark
A contest entry
- Searching for Family by kelbornro.
850 points, ended September 11, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 1: Hit me With your Best Pre-write. by edit my world..
425 points, ended October 20, 2007, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is good.
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this is a beautiful poem at the same time it is very sad.
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I must say I like the first line the best! It is so eloquent and sorrowful. I think you could really add on to this if you wanted, but it's fine short like this too.
Anyway, great work, and thanks for adding to the reading list! 
~star wars fanatic~
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thankyou very much for entering but you havent told me what you would like to be. a brilliant poem however and thankyou again...hope to talk soon
kelbornro
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nicely written... it flows so smoothly, and the choice of words is very well done.
one thing... last line you wrote "to to". ^^
~Darc Raven, the Bard
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r u on right now that being 5:17 Sept 5 2007
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i was for a short time, then got off again.
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