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Linked Tanka

the gold light of dawn
highlights  black skeletal trees
on the horizon -
birdsong greets a brand new day
for Spring has at last returned

elsewhere 'tis autumn
just a hemisphere away
verdant trees shed leaves -
a carpet on which Winter
will ere long lay down its snow

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  • PureCountry
    September 8, 2007

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    I Love The

    Picture of the seasons you have painted for us. you have done it with such ease. Thank you for your submission and good luck!