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March With Me

The call of a hero
Fills The nights air
So I march
With my steel and wood
I brave all odds
Step into the dark
With an image of you in my heart
So you march with me
We are the demons bane
We shall drive back the darkness of life
Take it one step at a time
For we have found reason to live once more

Author notes

some opera was play and my mind made this

uhh idk

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  • stormynights
    September 2, 2007

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    Awesome

    This is truly outstanding. If we all could have someone feel that way about us...Wow. I hope this person sees and feels how important they are to you, to be so true blue about another is rare these days. You have done a remarkable job here sweetie, love your heart. Ohh...the title is outstanding. I never have very good titles..lol.


  • Myuhhhbuggg
    September 2, 2007

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    great write spenny! =]]

    This is by the far the best poem you've written! Its simply amazing. The emotion is real and I might have a slight idea who this is about =]. I loved it!!!


  • Celticpoet
    September 1, 2007
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    This is Good!

    I like this...it gives the impression of a warrior fighting against evil...good job!...Dan