As you sit there staring
Letting the whole world go by.
On to the rooftop you venture
No one to stop you
Everyone around oblivious of your reflection.
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Written September 20th, 2003
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One of my best friends and I (not the one I am boycotting) joke about how I am invisible. This joke comes because I am thick in size I am taller than the average female at 5'7. I always have on baggy clothes and they are normal probably black or dark. Yet some how when we are walking in malls or crowds of people or just minor stores people will bump in to me. They just don't see me. It's a very odd thing. Until it started happening with regualrity I paid it no attention but now... It really astounds and saddens me all at once. I must exist, alone, on my own separate plain of reality.
~JayLynn
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That is sad alone. Deep, cold and lonely.
Powerful acrostic.
Very good.
Sam
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ive always wondered which is worse to be alone or to be lonely.. i came to the conclusion its to be alone.. lonely is only a passing moment in that time but to be alone can be eternal in the mind.. well written.. pen on!!!
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That is how I feel at work sometimes for I am in a cubicle where no one can see me~That would be a good thing for some people
~ Awesome acrostics~Look forward to more~Keep them coming 
~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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woah, very well done! short, simple, and you get your point across extremely well!! i REALLY like how the first letter of each line spelled "ALONE"
VERY COOL! keep it up :-)
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you'd be amazed at how many people see you
and try as you might
you are never truly alone
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Well put, short and to the point, and a very clear...sad illustration of..... alone. When one is truly alone, there are no witnesses.. to change things.
~~whims
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