Riding on that horse always brings a smile on my face
I feel the wind rushing threw my face
I'm as happy as a mother with her new bright blue eyed baby
I'm as free as a animal leahed from its dreadful cage
Riding on that piece of beauty makes me feel as free
as a bird soaring in the sky with all the freedom in the world
Author notes
i wrote this when i was 9 but now im 10 and i did a bit of editing
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and under: YOUR FAVORITE ANIMAL by Sky Prince Ireland.
500 points, ended November 19, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ Poems about Animals~ Contest for kids up to age 13 by PinkPony.
450 points, ended January 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Super super super!
Great poem!Wish yuo good luck in the contest!
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YAY!!
A really fine poem.
I am glad you shared it with us in my contest. 
Horses are beautiful and so is your poem. 
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A fun, soaring poem. Horses are fun, aren't they? Thanks for sharing this and for entering my contest. Good luck to you.
Brian -
I bet you hadfun with your horse.I liked your poem alot good job longlife!!!!!
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i've riden once before.
without someone leading me and your right i do feel free like a bird in the sky!
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This makes me want to ride a horse! I love your use of similes and imagery. Great!
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