Buds of june

Taken; First breath, tender rose

spreading aroma, depth of the breeze.

Intertwining, within a winds song

pulling into its soul beam light

spanning freely, mystifying

Breeze, aromatic scent

Lavender, honey suckle

bewilder hearts eyes

Blinding soul

depth love

A contest entry

Pre-write Party ~ Closes In One Day by Namita. 300 points, ended October 1, 2007, 90 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me your best Prewrite by Starz of Heaven. 550 points, ended September 8, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Starz of Heaven
September 8, 2007

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This is very nice indeed.
Intertwining, within a winds song
pulling into its soul beam light
Thanks for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest.Best Wishes
Seeking Peace
September 7, 2007
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I think you have portrayed your feelings in this one beautifully, you have created a work of art to go along beautifully with the portrayed picture, lovely sentiments

Thank you for taking the time to enter your favourite prewrite in this contest, I wish you the very best of luck

Karen
Namita
September 7, 2007

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I've seen the pic somewehre too. Beautifully portrayed as rose said. Thanxx for entering, poet. Godo luck.

Luv,
Candy
xxRainbowDawnxx
September 3, 2007
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Picture of Psyche right? I think I've seen it in another contest, or maybe on DeviantArt or something. I loved the imagery you used here, such sweet and delicate words surrounded by beauty, freshness and love. You described emotions being portrayed well.
WinE-reDpuddles
September 2, 2007

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wow. i like the form of ur poem and its depth. nice work! gud luck to u too... have a feeling ull get something fer this... well i hope u do
- Entwining Beauty
  September 2, 2007
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  THank you
intanglio2ring
September 1, 2007
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I like the form!
You've pulled many images to make this special!
Thanks for the great entry!
Tang
Stardust-luvr
September 1, 2007
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well done and good luck -- i love all the sensory within the write xx