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Rest your wings

Come rest your wings within my nest,
I’ll coo a song, I’ll sing my best.
To give you dreams, of happiness,
within my nest, 
               within my nest.

When this day slips, into the night,
you will have won your inner fight.
So spread your wings and just take flight,
into the night,
               into the night.


All Nature hears, so sing your song,
it doesn’t matter, right or wrong.
You will end up where you belong,
so sing your song,
               so sing your song.

Within my nest, come rest your wings,
respect and love, all living things.
And feel the wonders this life brings,
come rest your wings,
               come rest your wings.

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[Monotetra Rhyming Form]
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  • wenkywoo
    September 14
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    I love this poem


  • catz Moderators member
    November 13, 2007
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    Congratulations on the Bronze, Cindy Your poem is so beautiful


  • catz Moderators member
    November 10, 2007

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    I love this, Cindy You always have the most wonderful way with words, instilling such heartfelt feelings and loving messages within.

    Thank you for this beautiful piece

    Love and
    Dee

  • Kari gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    This was really beautiful and precious. I am sure that she will love it I wish you the best of luck in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    This is just lovely and sweet for Dee, I am sure she will love it when she comes back to read all
    And the background is so special and lovely too....

    XXJeannette

  • Warrior7
    October 27, 2007

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    This is superb Dove and the background is sensational. Dee is going to love it as your words are so sweet and gentle to read.


  • queen Moderators member
    October 26, 2007

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    This is beautiful, im sure she will love it Good luck in the contest


  • ma belle
    September 18, 2007

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    I must try this form.. loved the lyrical refrains. I haven't been on much with a major home renovation in progress but poems like this make me realize how much I miss all my AP friends. Hugs, ♥ Belle


  • Dark-Princess
    September 6, 2007
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    Wow! This is really soothing and nice! Well done lady :-) I l♥ve ya
    Dark-Princess


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful and tender poem that comforts my spirit right now. Especially this verse:
    "All Nature hears, so sing your song
    It doesn’t matter, right or wrong
    You will end up where you belong
    So sing your song,
    so sing your song"

    I lead the singing at church, sometimes is does come out wrong. But I know this means so much more than that. It means to me that no matter what I sing or do or be, I'm heard, and I matter.

    I don't know when you had the time to write this. It is exquisite and for me, full of healing. Thank you, Dove.


    • FifthDove
      September 2, 2007
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      Thank you Joyce, and yes, you took it they way I meant for it to be taken.

  • queen Moderators member
    September 2, 2007
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    Beautiful poem, very calming. I like this background a lot too

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