The soldiers of the candy world,
Weaponless, and all destined for death,
Honorably drafted one by one,
At the mercy of the candyshop owner.
Shipped off to foreign lands,
Lying lifelessly but with smiling faces,
At the bottom of the paper bag,
A sugar-coated uniform, their only armour.
Then arrives the moment of truth,
And together they face death,
As the enemy gets closer,
A dark shadow covers their fort.
Awaiting doom, at the hands of,
A sticky fingered kid with rotting teeth,
Their final battle arrives, against a canine and a few molars,
And loose they did, all died one after the other,
And although they have all passed,
Their remains choose to stay..
Causing a life of decay.
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god knows what i was smoking when i wrote this..lol..
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cute...
sweet little write
lol
really awesome
addie
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sweet
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Awwww cute and awsome I prefer gummy worms to gummy bears though....
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I thought this was so precious! I love the way you've captured the impending doom of beloved childhood treat. I think we all thought about killing those cute little gummies at one time or another...good work
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that was cute....
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hahahah this is hilarioussssss it makes my cheecks hurt from smiling so much. i think you should write about about pixie sticks next...just sayin
xoxox
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hahaha I love it. I really like the creativity of it. i laughed, it's very delightful. it kinda makes me sad though! to think that those poor little bears have no chance...lol but they're yummy. delightful, truely delightful.
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HEE HEE this was sooooooooooooo cute I actually chuckled out loud...you did great job on this keep up the good work , Thanks for the laugh and smile
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This is great!!!!
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sweet
Comedy is hard but all you need is a simple idea. you found one.
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lmao
whatever you were smoking
I sure as hell want some
LOL
This was amazing
you did a great job. you should enter this in some kind of candy contest if you ever find one lol. This is wonderful
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hee hee
Great stuff! I know where Gummies go when they die also! Right around my waist! I run a death camp for gummie bears and I my picture is on the post office of Gummy Teddyville. I am wanted for mass gummycide! Nah this was really cute and imaginatve. God bless you, Mark
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haha this is really good
made me laugh too
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