How can I begin to write
The words? The ones
Carefully chosen to describe
One so indescribable.
His amazing mind is like no other
Often astounding many with the facts
Few of us would ever know
But Oh!
Such imagination, with just a few
Words he can take you to places
You've never dreamt of His eyes
The most beautiful shade of blue
A mirror to the passion within
With strength and determination
That would make any proud, he lived
Pursuing his dreams with that same passion
Like the flames he put out on so many
Occasions He conquered all and happiness
Was with him. His smile shall be with me
Always, a constant reminder of the love, and
The bond we shared never ending.
For he was my twin brother,
And though now he walks through beautiful
Gardens by golden streams, I know
Eternally he shall remain apart of
Me.
Author notes
This is a poem written in tribute to my twin brother, known as Bear345 on Allpoetry.. He passed suddenly on August 22nd 2007. Please enjoy
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Most Eloquent
A most moving tribute to a beloved twin brother with whom I believe you will surely walk those beautiful
gardens so eloquently described in your poem, one day
George(JUDMC) U.K. May I request that you read my poem called"The Twins" you may like it.Many Thanks!! -
Sorry For Your Loss
This is a heartfelt write - a sad piece but he is now safe in the arms of Jesus - in a much better place than here - someday you will be united - I am from Canada too - Bless God - keep on keeping on - Joe
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Oh wow... throughout this whole thing I thought it was about being in love and so completely crazy about someone, you couldn't dream of being happy without them... but siblings do give you the same feeling (without the romantic sense, of course). Excellent.
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Very beautiful and quite inspiring...so sorry for your loss...the memories you have built will live on forever....hugs, Terry
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Thank you I am glad you liked it
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this is so beautiful...what a profound experience you are going through...excuse my other note....I just found out about your brother......august 22nd was my mother's 95th birthday!
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