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before harvest

Left
before  harvest
garden of bounty

melons fattened in  sun
the hardy and mild, all reached
for sweetness and waters;

Heavy grape vines, bulbous tree fruits,
glistening reds, yellows, and greens
all ready for  hands,
reward to loving touches
hopes and whispers ....

The sun and winds began to claim
dangling ripeness to fall
and find hungrier mouths
such bounty from trysts of flowers, bees
and butterflies in summer beauty
all fallen now, to ground.

And ground has hungry hosts
and falling still, to frost and snaps
dew became ice, rain to blankets of
softest snow, and more; gentle covers.

Spring returned alone
the waste of Autumn became  splendor
the new life of the year unfolding,
alone in Spring rains,
in solitude to await the turn to summer
alone

an untended garden of memories.

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  • Never Fall in Love
    October 18, 2007

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    ehh ... you've done a great job and certainly it was worthy of the two trophies you have encased on this poem ... I don't know, and maybe it is just me, but the poem didn't appeal to me.

    But that is not because of the poem - but the topic of nature. It is something that is too happy or gentle for my tastes

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
    Never ♥


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    October 3, 2007

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    i would like to thank you for sharing your talent with me through this wonderful write. i wish you well in the contest that we both have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    October 3, 2007
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    i would like to thank you for sharing your talent with me through this wonderful write. i wish you well in the contest that we both have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • Sarah957
    September 7, 2007
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    This is very nice. Congrats on your trophy!


  • ennovy silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    You reminded me me of my life on our farm during the harvest time. How the trees all gave, and the fields had to be taken care of before the first frost or snow. This was a beautiful memory for me....write on my talented poet friend...........novyrose*


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 1, 2007

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    Oh wow, PK, what a journey through seasons...and such a down fall of heart to know summer has done spun its best for this year.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Excellent!

    This is excellent indeed! Well worthy of the silver trophy. Thank you for sharing. Laura x


  • Mallig gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    This is wonderful, substantial, atmospheric. Another brilliant work, PK! Congratulations on the award


  • XXXDark--AngelXXX
    September 1, 2007

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    Amazing

    Amazing Poem...I Loved It. The Imagery Is Very Great. You Have A Great Gift. You Are An Amazing Poet. Keep Up The Great Writes.

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 1, 2007

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    Congratulations on your award. A wonderful poem with great imagery of all that the season has to offer. Thank you for sharing, have a great day, Ken IBT


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Ah yes, it is autumn now where you are...and you've painted the season of leaf poetry in such vivid colours and emotions... the browns and the rusty colours of fall. I love how this poem speaks to all the senses and captures the cycle of the seasons with whispers of a gentle nostalgia. We all have gardens of memories...and we can but wait through the seasons...warmth will return. Lovely "leaf" poetry this is.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Namita
    September 1, 2007

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    Wow! This is an excellent piece... wonderful writing...

    "dew became ice, rain to blankets of
    softest snow, and more; gentle covers"

    an untended garden of memories... just simply brilliant. Great job and good luck in the contest.

    Candy


  • kaibab silver member
    September 1, 2007

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    Well such a masterpiece of flow,
    is given stillness to flow my brook,
    when friendship grows is ancient color
    swilling ache from rusty branches.,,,

    This is fanstastic...

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