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For Those Who Died (Harry Potter spoilers!)

For those who died,
Who chose to fight,
Who stayed at the ready,
While the others took flight.

For those who died,
So brave, so strong,
So eager to service,
Helping Harry along.

For Tonks, Lupin,
Fred, Snape, Madeye,
And so many others,
Thank you for standing by.

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    November 10, 2007
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    Thank you so much for entering this wonderful poem!
    I absolutely love it!
    I wish you had mentioned Dobby's name at the end too.. but oh well.

    Thank you so much for entering this poem in my contest. Congrats on the Bronze and good luck in my contest.
    Keep on writing,

    Nooni


  • TwilightWolf
    November 10, 2007

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    weeeeeeeeeeeee harry potter poem and you might wan tto update ur home page because im lite cloud of doom not moon enchatress. I HACKING LOVED IT


  • leander Moderators member
    September 10, 2007
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    I haven't seen any of the harry potter movies I'm one of the few that isn't really a fan of such fantasy things *embarrased*

    It is short what you have written here, but I like the emotional feel you brought with it


    • LuckyBlackCat
      September 14, 2007
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      you haven't seen the movies!? you really don't know what your mising...... but, read the books first, then the movies make sense.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 9, 2007
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    A good tribute to the team there. Short, but emotional. You did a good job on this for sure


  • DeathlyHollow666
    September 7, 2007
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    Nice

    I liked the poem and it was nice. It surely salutes the book.


  • Faeryn
    September 6, 2007

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    you mean Fred right?? George didn't die...Fred did. also you forogt Dobby in your list of casualities

    Awesome poem; short but sweet and nice rhyming.
    Blessings,
    -Aidyn-


  • tsarina
    September 2, 2007

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    wow -- great!!! tis lovely, i especially like the rhyming. a little short, but otherwise it is wonderful!!!
    your ap cousin
    sasha ♥


    • LuckyBlackCat
      September 2, 2007
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      I know.

      Ok, so it's short, i still like it! thanks for your comment!

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