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(Contest) For Whatever You Command Me

Your breath
as you crawl over my wanting body

Your weight
over me
as you roughly cuff my hands
without a fight

Your teasing lick
as you spread me wide

Pulling out the toys for the night

I am yours
For whatever you command me

Author notes

heh, im very much a submissive. this was written for a contest to explain what turns me on in 40 words or something like that *dosent remember the exact rules*

A contest entry

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  • Tarja
    October 11, 2007

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    Congrats on the honorable mention and the bronze trophy... however this just didn't do it for me... too short and not enough detail.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Followed my instructions and then gave me a black eye piece this was priceless
    I really liked it thanks and good luck @88 is a personal code I am using in the contest
    As a note ~ thanks