Golden memories are reflected
flowing in crystal clear streams
as sunny as freshly forged
momentoes.
Deep, ebony eyes
scorching me aflame
with desire,
as my spirit
rejoiced in
all the colours
of many rainbows.
Lifted on white
foamy waves
deliciously caressed,
my then, empty soul.
From certain hollows
of darkness,
together we triumphed
in scents of vivid hues.
I now rest
in the pastel shades
of your lingering tenderness.
Author notes
Prompt - 'A Certain Shade'
A contest entry
- A certain shade... by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Astounding piece! I like every line you have penned and with the shades you have created.
My favorite lines:
"Golden memories are reflected
flowing in crystal clear streams
as sunny as freshly forged
momentoes."
Great work
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN
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a wonderful take on the prompt
written with strong powerful words which create a strong effect
loved it well done and best of luck
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