Who are we?
Where are we going?
This path we walk
Is becoming rocky
And I’m becoming lost
In what we once had..
This was meant to be
A fresh start
A new beginning
But it seems
Like the beginning of the end
What are we doing here?
Who have we become?
We’re just two ghosts
Too scared to go toward the light
To cross to the other side
And grasp who we were
This was what we
Were waiting for
The answers to our prayers
But it seems
Like damnation has finally come
How did we end up here?
Why now, to us?
Our love wild as fire
Snuffed out in a single breath
And we’re but strangers
Left hand in hand
When is it going to end?
This journey, these steps
Are becoming too hard to take
Alone
And I’m not sure I can go on
Author notes
there...i wrote...happy happy joy joy...heh
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Ah.. after long time no see..
A quality piece of work..
Just hope that the poem doesnt reflect real life..
Beautiful, excellent use of imagery, easy flowing lines.. so good.. I like it..
Will we see more of you soon? Please?
Love n Hugz n All that Jazz
x x x
Evert
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It's like...
It's like they weren't even able to begin... lots of sadness in this one, glad to see you posting again, one can only hope that I didn't force ya! lol... Anywayz thanks for sharing. -
It's nice to see something from you stranger.... I sense the sadness in this one, a sadness I have know all too well recently... yep this one touched me in places kept closed... beautiful and sad all at once... I hope the light shines a little brighter soon hun...
Have missed you around here
Karen
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