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never stops

Your words make me cry
With every word you weave stronger the lie
The lie that binds me to heart

When I finally broke free I crumbled and fell
My heart it broke and shattered but there was no one to answer my call
I can’t be happy I’ve lost the real me

I've lost myself under a mountain of pain
Pain caused for you gain
I’m left no better then I was before you

You were my sunshine and my rain
You made everything seem sane
Al I want is you back

But I can’t think of you now with out feeling sick
All my friends knew this would happen but I was too thick
I did what I wanted and got hurt by your hand

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  • Ray Von
    September 4, 2007

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    Yeah our conversatin the other day sort of established that!!! I lov that last verse! and i love you!
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  • See-Thru-My-Eyes
    September 2, 2007

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    Ditto :-[

    Guys r fucking pricks...
    My fav line was 'pain caused for your gain' cos tis so unbelieveably true!!
    Amazingly effective... I'm so furious from nostalgia now ^-^ tanx!!


  • CarolinaSkillet
    September 1, 2007

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    *hugs* This is a beautiful write. I know exactly how I feel, this is how I feel thanks to Gratitude and Angelina.

    *hugs again* It's a wonderful write.

    CR