shadowed remembrances among daisies
sighing next to your pallid tombstone,
golden afternoons along shore
as waves of passions consumed
life’s magenta sunset,
cooling azure breeze
embraced pink blush
on your cheek,
erased
now
Author notes
reverse etheree
A contest entry
- A certain shade... by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"waves of passions consumed
life’s magenta sunset"
Wonderful lines! Love the form.
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN
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Very nice reverse etheree. The images that you painted with your words are a beautiful as any painting that an artist creates.
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I have to catch up with your page
but I can see you are still the Queen of form,
as always amazing work,
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
pretty =]
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