Do you ever wonder if...
I would lose myself in your embrace
surrender to the power of your kiss
grow weak at the sensation of
your touch
I dream of tracing your lips with my fingers,
goosebumps on your skin,feeling you tremble,
moving together as one,nearing
the last chords of the melody
I should give every part of my being to you,
my mind, my body, my heart and my soul
act on what I want, what I imagine while I sleep
fighting to pull away from you,yet struggling to
get close to you
I will give in to the feelings and
impulses I have when I dream about you
to the desire in my veins and the
longing in my heart
Do you ever think about me
Do you ever wonder if...
A contest entry
- Best You Have (Round Two) by Xgeekdreamgonewrong.
450 points, ended September 25, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nicely done
The imagery is spectacular and I love the way you approached this. Good form. I hope to see more from you.
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Very good!!!!!!!!!! I really enjoyed this piece of art work!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing it with us!!!!!!!!!!!
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"moving together as one,nearing
the last chords of the melody"
I love those lines, my favourite part of the entire piece.
I really like how you build this around the question of "what if...?" Because that is a question that can follow people all the time. I like the love and sensual tone, and you worded this very nicely. great job! -
LOve this, great metaphor:
"moving together as one,nearing
the last chords of the melody"
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Lovely, romantic poem, so full of love and sexual affection. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you. Julie.
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awwwwwwwwwwwww this was very sweet, i often wonder those things about the one i love
but in my heart I know she does too! I love this it has so many feelings that many here on AP will understand. Keeep up the great job
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