Your whimpering groans corrupt me inside,
My fingertrips travel to my genitalia to hide.
I feel your warm fluids flow out in a race
As I moan on your pussy,
You cum on my face...
Author notes
Darn, writing that made me need to masturbate
Hope it's okay.
A contest entry
- Answer Me??????? by theredcatjazzoflove.
1200 points, ended September 1, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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SHOT, SENSUAL, AND OH SO SWEET!
What a hot and delicious treat your overflowing lover has given to you - as there is nothing better than pussy juice on ones face - unless it is a cocktail of cock cum and pussy cum all mixed up.
Darn, writing that made me need to masturbate
Hope it's okay.
to answer your author notes above - It was more than OK and reading this made me need to masturbate also - to stroke my freshly shaven cock and balls - and to cum in the palm of my hand - so I could lick up every YUMMY drop when my JERKING was done.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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fair play, you're filthy
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Hot and to the point. Not afraid to write what you feel. Awesome write. I look forward to reading more. Wow!
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Oh my...
you have no inhibitions...
letting yourself being corrupted...fingertips traveling to genitals...
feeling my warm fluids....
moaning on my pussy...(what a unique idea! try it on me please!)...
and you enjoying my cuming on your face...
Everything about you is beautiful, cutie!
I can write...and write...and write...for hours about your highly erotic erotica...and about you, honey...
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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i miss your poetry Alie =]
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This is 35 words so you are totally way off from 35 my contest requires in pacific 45 words. And its sad because this piece actually sort of answer my question its up to you if you want to fix it and compete still in the competition ~ jewels ~ damn ! Fix it a personal code to myself if your fixing it is @88 please I want it to be 45 words
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very good, i like lezzy poems
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