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Wanting More

The anticipation of my lovers touch

The way he arouses me

With a single look

The way the thought of him

Makes my cunt wet

The way his cock stands erect

Hands, bodies desperate to explore

Satisfying my thirst but still

Leaving me wanting more

A contest entry

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  • AngelicSinz
    September 1, 2007
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    Awsome

    just love this it straight to the point!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Mrs. Lady sugar o my I am surprise how well you did this with 45 words. I am impressed @88 a personal code for myself in judging the contest. I want to thank you for making this contest very hard o my this was good damn instructions ~ jewels ~


    • onesugar gold member
      September 1, 2007
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      Thank you my dear twin
      Love ya babes ~sugar~


  • Ephiphany
    September 1, 2007

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    Ahemmm....

    oh my now....sugar...are you being Naughty again, doesnt matter this is a Good cause
    Loved this, sis...loved it!


    • onesugar gold member
      September 1, 2007
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      Hey sis
      Me naughty never
      What gave you that idea?
      cheers for the comment Piff
      Appreciate it as you know
      Love ya ~sugar~


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 1, 2007
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    So few words, such a lot said!!!!!
    Nice poem, all the best in the contest...Sue

    • onesugar gold member
      September 1, 2007
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      Thank you Sue
      always appreciate your comments
      ~sugar~


    • kennethlaney
      September 1, 2007
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      Very good (wild)

      That was good Sugar! Good luck in the contest,
      "BOO"

      • onesugar gold member
        September 1, 2007
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        Appreciate your comments
        Thank you Boo
        ~sugar~

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