Tongue as soft as rose petal
As she travels down my spine
Fingertips that feel like silk
When they slip inside
Her hardended nipple in my mouth
My throbbing clit between her teeth
Legs locked together, I feel her wetness
Her fountain pours warm, sweet.
A contest entry
- Answer Me??????? by theredcatjazzoflove.
1200 points, ended September 1, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Julie inspired it with that pic, hope it don't scare ya lol hope y'all like it too if not oh well lol
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this was a well deserved trophy the lyrics were well stimulating and i must say what lead me to this piece i am a member of www.8hop.com and your friend her has her all poetry page listen on her other poetry website page and i was honored to read this
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thankyou
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this was a very great tribute here i actually saw the piece she written for you and i dont know her but i have read a few of her lyrics and i cant wait to get to know her personality but your piece is a real big turn on here nice write this was a well deserved victory.
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thanx sweetie!
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loved this
true passion is a real turn on yall...great write and u really deserved the award of Bronze....
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thanx E!
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Lol
LMAO woman you so hilarious that was a nice tease thanks for entering dear I know you were bizzy and sick awe I feel bad but I like this you got me crackin my hot ass off you really did a great job @88 personal passing code of me liking this and making my judging easier ~ the red book of love ~
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glad ya liked it doll, i was gonna write about a guy till i saw that pic, don't feel bad I enjoyed participating see hun ur an inspration aswll as an awsome woman
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