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The September School Days!

New uniform, new hopes and ideas,
Meeting old friends, reviving friendship,
New passion, new sight, new clips,
Separation died, delights haunt

When September started in my school days!

She was with me, just before my eyes,
Running, stooping, turning, smiling,
Her voice sweet sounds always ringing,
Forced me began a love song singing,

When September started in my school days!

When studies carried, my mind carries
Nothing but her love and charm
Her eyes deep, her feelings warm
Like grapes sour and sweet raspberries,

When September started in my school days!

In recess time, she called on me,
Snatched book from me I used to read,
Her breathing sew deepest love seed,
I studied books, she my face read!!!

When September started in my school days!

She pulled my hand to join her in play,
In hide and seek and fairy n Fay!
When lush green leaves on the trees sway,
Some autumn flowers just turning grey....

When September started in my school days!

At football game, she was very good,
In winning, losing by me she stood,
Sometimes she laughed making me rude,
Her smiles filled heart of the dude!

When September started in my school days!

Oh my love-mate where have ye gone?
Leaving me but sighing and moan,
Waiting for days when we meet on
A September day, deciding on phone!!!!!

When September started in my school days!

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    January 15

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    This is lovely really cleverly written takes me back to the freshness of my own september school days, it made my heart soar, Thankyou


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 1, 2007

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    Simply pretty and touching!!!

    Your poem is so simple and yet so touching. You have expressed your feelings in a straightforward manner which emphasizes on the honesty and purity of your heartfelt emotions.
    I really enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for sharing with us.
    Would you mind reading one of my poems http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3342726 (somehow it’s special for me) I would appreciate your comments.

    ~Vernal Bloom~


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      September 2, 2007
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      Many Thanks

      Respected Ma'sumah!
      Your sweet words always fill my heart with unwavering joys..You are so kind and humane..May Almighty bless you ever!