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the Way You Arouse Me

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The warmth of your saliva

Running down me slowly

Feeling my cock

Between your moistened lips

Sensual way you grab

And massage as you suck

When you rub your erect nipples

On the tip of my cock

Bringing me to ecstasy

 

Over and over again

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A contest entry

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  • Flowergirl
    August 31, 2008
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    very nice and visual too i loved it...


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 29, 2007

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    J this was for my contest holly crap! i feel pleasured i gave this silver o my gosh i love it even more this is love for a great artist see i love you


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 1, 2007
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    O my this was very tasty and very juicy delicious word play o my I am such a erotic hot lady and to have to read this just made me thirsty maybe I should have extended the words Damn! Ok I love it @88 a passing code saying I liked it to make my judging easier jewels gosh hard contest to judge


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    *gulps* yikes.
    Man your getting to good at these what the heck you been doing
    Anyhow great imagery and excellent flow..wrong choice of words.
    best of luck on this hot sensual piece.
    Tory


  • serenity silvermoon
    September 1, 2007
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    wow brother this was Very sensual but very well written you have such talent you are a great poet, a great brother and most of all you are a great friend keep up the great work in everything you do thanks for sharing as god bless you forever amd always love your little sister dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon


  • moon2u
    September 1, 2007
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    Whoa!

    Oh my gosh this is hot stuff!
    Very erotic and sensuous


  • Dragons Lady
    September 1, 2007

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    Very sensual and well written without going over the top. It has a smooth flow with wonderful imagery. Good luck in the contest.

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