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The Move

A map we posted
on the wall.
Focused on daily.

Leaving
all behind. A
new start.

Fresh air.

A place to raise
our son.

Family, lives,
disconnected.

Our past,
an ocean away.

Not looking back
is easy.

Best move we
ever made.

Hawai'i my
home.

A contest entry

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  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    September 4, 2007
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    Nice write, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


    • islekine gold member
      September 5, 2007
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      Thank you!

      And thanks for awarding my poem...I really appreciate it!
      *PEACE*