People tell me I'm pretty
They tell me I'm thin
I hate all those liars
I'm ugly outside, and just as ugly within
I starve for perfection
I feel empty inside
All the pain that I feel
All the times that I've cried
I hate the girl in the mirror
Staring back at me
You don't know what it's like
To have to hate what your see
People say thy're worried
They tell me I should eat
But I want to be thin
I refuse to be beat
Ebverything reminds me
Of why I suffer so
I'm digusting and fat
If I ever give in it fills me with woe
I only feel good
When I'm empty
No food will I taste
Until I have a tiny waist
Perfection's size zero
And Ana's my hero
Hating the girl I am now
But I'll love who I'll be
When I am thin
It will fill me with glee
I'll look in the mirror and love what I see
A contest entry
- LuckyCharms & BrokenHearts by Dead Star--x.
550 points, ended September 6, 2007, 17 entries
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this is a very sad poem and its so amazingly true i love how the peom just flows and the rhyme that it has at times and im a guy and i actually went through the exact same thing and it really hit home and felt like the persona was me. Thanks for entering my very first contest and cograts on being a finalist for speaking the truth. Best of luck.
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i feel good
when im empty
i know that feeling & when i dont eat anything i want to puke so its an added bonus
thanx for entering & good luck
CureMyTragedy♥
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