Your exit, her entry
All the kings, queens and gentry
X rated or G
Its really the angle at which you observe
Forgetting to remember
That it is perturbed
Living with disturbia long enough
And it will all become disturbingly normal
Throw the corpse in a burlap sack
And we will dress it formal
Whether it be lengthy or short
It all just depends
Misinterpret the interpreter
And it all starts to taste like lemons
Nothing really makes a difference
Like the dying painfully of the bends
Sprawl across the ground
roll in the dirt
Hold on to the grass
To keep from flying off
The face of the earth
A contest entry
- An Introduction by polly filla.
470 points, ended September 3, 2007, 2 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the idea of how things are viewed dependant on differing perspectives in this piece. The wording gives full realisation of this idea.
GOod write.
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Ohh jovie i lurvee this one..
I like all your writing.. It doesnt make sense, but at the same time it does very much so. Good job. :]
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well, since you've got your own friends now, i guess i'll just dig myself a grave....forgotten!
FORGOTTEN!!!
makes perfect sense. jolene, u r seriously just a crazy good poet, and you don't need me to tell you that. it's also such an intrinsic look at how important perspective is.
awesome. so go find a disco dancer, cuz ur poetry is already on FIRE!!!!
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omg i ♥♥♥♥ this ! its amazing im adding you as a favorite
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I love the ending...very good piece with subtle rhyme....a great and apt title...way to rock it!
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wow!
an all-round introduction
exactly!
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