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I like it when you dress in red
I love it when you dress for bed
I love it more when the red clothes go
I love it still more when I see what's on show
I love what you wear when your dressing for me
I love that you're bare when I caress what I see
I love that you giggle when I make a start
I love that you'll love me to start at the heart
I love that you'll be there what ever I do
I            Love              You

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Not much good really, but it started out great in my head, but got lost.

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  • darkwitch
    September 1, 2007
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    nice, it started good, and ended great with


    I love You