The Cornucopia of life, filled with tender flesh of desire.
As I ripen on your vines, cling to your divine branches.
Sweet is the ecstacy of your firming fruits.
Peaches and Nectarines consume my exoticness.
Like two Peas in a pod engaged within the Spinach leafs.
In a vegetating state we indulge together grain by grain.
As our Cornucopia of emotions spring into that Squashing delight.
Chile Peppers burn my sexual arousal, flowering my drive.
Consummating the dreams, of our fruitful love together.
Corn pops my moaning screams expanding my emotions.
As the juices drip upon your horn, fulfilling your cravings.
The flow of the sweet nectar like well-aged wine.
Savored with every taste as I inhale your aroma.
The Cornucopia of life, filled with tender flesh of desire.
Author notes
HAPPY BIRTHDAY EARL MAY YOUR FRUITS INDULGE WITH YOUR VEGETABLES HEHEHE
In a list
A contest entry
- FOR WOMEN ONLY - MAKE ME HARD FOR MY BIRTHDAY! by Swtpoetryman.
600 points, ended September 4, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice expression of the sensuality of fruit and vegetables. I like the fact that your poem is suggestive without being blatantly erotic or overtly sexual.
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Nice vocbulary in this poem. It is very cute.
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Wow I love your wide choice of words, comparisons and vivid imagigary. I especially love:
"As I ripen on your vines, cling to your divine branches.
Sweet is the ecstacy of your firming fruits.
Peaches and Nectarines consume my exoticness."
Amazing write, keep it up
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I really like the vine imagery and the way in which it is a constant reminder throughout the piece of clinging to something and of knowledge. A very interesting selection of words. Anthony.
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wow
you do have a way with food. lovely descriptions. very sensual
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Chile Peppers burn my sexual arousal, flowering my drive.
Consummating the dreams, of our fruitful love together.
Corn pops my moaning screams expanding my emotions.
kickass!
And I am impressed at your ability to spell that word lol.
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Man this was totally different than I expected when I read the title and clicked on it...lol.
Ahemmmmm
Different yet enticing as well. You managed to describe the act of sex as if indulging on fruits and veggies.
They are healthy you know
A fun read.
Becky
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i really really enjoyed this.. it was different to what im used to reading/writing. i have to say though that the 'squashing delight.. and corn pops my moaning.." sort of caught me a bit off guard. those two expressions didnt seem to flow as sweetly if you will with the rest of the piece... or maybe ive just been with the kids too much lately and 'corn pops' made me think of cereal LOL... but seriously, this was wonderful... refreshing
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I really like how the first line is your last line, that's kind of how life goes, that's why I like it so much in this poem. It also adds to the feeling in this piece. I think that you did a good job writing this.
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Honestly this poem turned me on quite a bit and I don't think me ever reading about fruits and vegetables did that before. I certainly think you deserved a trophy and I can;t imagine who could've done better. Great write. Now I'll be thinking about peppers & corn all day.
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Your comments made me smile. I am glad you enjoyed this write so much. I like to write about love using other things I think is makes it sound more erotic and interesting. here are two links I will send you to see what you think of these crazy write. Thanks again greatly appreciated.
LISA
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Excellant/romantic/sensuous
Quite a sensuous write. Excellent imagery, and good rhythm as well. Overall very well written indeed. Keep on writing.
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A FINE SUBMISSION, INDEED!
I love a ripe and juicy peach - to say the least! LOL!!! Thanks SO MUCH for submitting to my contest andf making My Birthday Contest a very hard one to judge, indeed! Here cum an apple, a banana, and a juicy orange right now to stick in your horn of plenty!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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this was...interesting...I'll have to read more of your work
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