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Great Ones




I've dreamt
of shooting stars
and wishing wells,

but dreams
get no one
anywhere.


Your words,
your lips,
your alibi-

all thoughts
I'm so familiar with.

I've guessed
at lurking ghosts,

like a memory
I'm fighting.


Black and white is lonely;
a fantasy of what could have been-
a certain shade
of
lovely.




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  • Virgoan
    September 4, 2007
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    Oops, I forgot

  • Virgoan
    September 4, 2007

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    Soft yet strong piece. There is this in between shade playing within the lines; Well done

    My favorite lines:

    "like a memory
    I'm fighting."

    Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing my friend.

    >>>VIRGOAN