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Birthday Missed

Regretting the birthday of passions missed
Where I stood behind her hopeful suitors
Longing her smile
All of the while

Quietly I stood as her cake was brought
Could she feel my pulse from across the room?
Unseen to her
Flutter and stir

Captivated by her warm spirit's draw
Close enough for her scent to fill my sails
I breathe her in
Craving her sin

I day dream...

Mmmm to be standing face to face with her
As I feel the texture of her hands
Place them on me
Where they should be

Freely she savors my dips and strong swells
Sensing my compliment rising for her
As we entwine
Into sublime

My fingers dance lightly 'cross her smooth skin
Molding her now in a deeper massage
I squeeze her curves
Whisper sweet words

A taste of her neck leads gently to ears
As her heart beats against my manly form
Slowly we kiss
Savor the bliss

Running her fingers through strands of my hair
Her lust is pleased as she reveals my flesh
Knowing she'll feel
All of my zeal

I drift over belly and then to her thighs
My body, a cloud that floats through her field
Lips lead the way
Where I shall play

Smooth gentle fingers caress as they slide
Her sweet spot enticed into a wet grip
Defenseless and slain
Lust in my reign

day dream breaks...

If I had been seen by that birthday girl
My blue eyes reflecting charm of a pearl
Heat of her view
Warming me through

My candle erect and burning for her
My flame dancing to melt her honey wax
Wishing for me
Sets my wish free

Can she feel me here with this vision aglow?
Her lips in slow motion, just about to blow...

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  • Laura
    September 12, 2007

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    this is brilliant you imagery certainly opened doors within my mind well done and good luck in the contest xx


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 2, 2007
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    Whew! It just got awfully hot in here. This is very powerfully penned. The imagery is strong and vibrant just as it should be. The flow here was so smooth and gracefully done as well as tasteful. No vulgarity here, just pure romance and sensuality. It was certainly a pleasure to read this exquisite piece. Good luck in the contest.
    ♥ Touchof1der