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O My, My Firefly

Exploding my firefly
Your light went dark
This sky ablaze
What happens next?

Spiraling forward
Blue lights
Deaths touch
Exploding my firefly.

Did you scream?
(A thousand vaults)
Was there a scream?
(There was no time)

Staying high
Diving low
These cupped hands
A prison
Before the glass.

Drink it up
Pour it out
A final prayer
Pressed between fingers.

Did you scream?
(I went deaf)
Did you scream?
(I didn't hear you)

Dragged your guts
Writing my name
Fluorescent yellow.

A forever reminder
Erased.


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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 31, 2007

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    I would have to say i remember these days of my youth but also have to say now, that's so sad best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • this is a war
    September 6, 2007
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    This is extremely good, thank you for entering the contest