Constant view of monogamous futility
Ethical virtues has gone astray
A contest entry
- 10 words by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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10 words above par! The way you say so much truth in 10 words is really beautiful.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck
>>>VIRGOAN
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Thank U so much. It Jumped out at me and had to be written.
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Perfect words for the Picture
What a beautiful and vivid explanation of the relationship. In ten words you explained their
problems...Damm good picture, strong words and
this shows your unique talent......write on!...novy
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Just really an odd feeling I had. I had to find a picture after I came up with the words. I actually do it backwards
thank ya
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Really dark and gloomy thoughts here... very dark These vocabulary are big though monogamous? and and futility?
This looks like abuse
or perhaps of relationship -
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Thoughts of too much lust with no love and when folks get caught. It ruins the relationship on different levels
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O'MY
Such a powerful piece in so few lines...You are right on!...Ethical virtues has gone astray and your picture is awesome
...Thanks for sharing
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LOl!! thanks - It hit like a smack on the back of the head. ~ Cheers my friend ~
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