I left notes in
your lunch box,
expressing my
deepest thoughts;
while you indulge
in my scented
pages,
growing with
excitement as
each word is read;
...for desert
a seductive picture
to keep the flame
burning until
you return home,
where intensity
meets ecstasy,
...with a massage
Author notes
This same poem was in your finalist list under my other account. Due tp persoanl reasons I am entering it under a different one. Sorry for any confusion or hassle. Thanks, Amy
A contest entry
- Who Do You Love? (I WARN YOU... IT'S EXTREMELY CHALLENGING!) by Cherokee.
750 points, ended September 15, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I've seen this somewhere. Very nice.
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a very nice poem, i remember getting notes in a lunchbox, but that was so long ago, what a treat it is to have that suprise and the promise that goes along with it.
blessings and best wishes,
~richard
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Black background, please. It looked better clad in black. And as I've said before, well done.
I-Araxie-I
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