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A Hand To A Rose

If I could lift your heart up
Like a hand does to a rose
I would take your heart upon me
and breath your whole being
to take in all of you forever



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  • Rele anmwe
    September 22, 2007
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    Oh, too bad you can't (lol).

    Pretty nice, holla back. God bless you my "Lady".


  • Namita
    September 1, 2007

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    Woww! That is deep. Such a profound write stuffed in with a wonderful metaphor. Loved this. Great job!

    Candy


  • Sinfully Yours
    August 31, 2007

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    Once again, DEEP! So short and sweet, simple and delicate, but it contains more meaning than a romance novel. Great job! I love the similes 'like a hand does to a rose'. Passionate with awe. Wonderful!
    Miss Marie


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 31, 2007

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    If only we could love that intense!...Lift you up like a hand to a rose...take your heart upon me and breathe it's whole being...sighs...Thank you so much for sharing

  • Liquid memories
    August 31, 2007

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    sweet with touching words. nice write.


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    August 31, 2007

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    wonderfull written. clear and to the point thanks for sharing this with me and i hope to read more from you soon. truly wonderfully written. good luck in the contest and thanks again for sharing.

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