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Kissed With A Song

I want to be kissed with a song

With beauty and let it be long

That dawn can curl her eyes that peek

For she hids much more if we shall seek


I must know where the rain truely drips

Not upon the floras but where in my heart

To know how love likes to be kissed

To hear the song of a beautiful kiss


Pick out a song and make it your new

I want your kiss to be my true

Write your heart upon your lips

So I may hear all through the kiss










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  • Liquid memories
    November 20, 2007

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    your words of love flow as the song of a kiss. success in the contest.


  • Namita
    September 1, 2007

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    Yes, such a romantic, simple and captivating piece...Write your heart upon your lips very enchanting. Great job.

    Candy


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 31, 2007

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    So enchanting and filled with romance~So may I hear all through the kiss...sighs...I want one!.Where did you get yours?


  • Sinfully Yours
    August 31, 2007

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    Such great poetry dedicated to one single kiss. It's enchanting and full of desire. Great write! Don't read many poems about the beauty of a kiss.
    Miss Marie

  • Liquid memories
    August 31, 2007
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    nice

    i loved the line write your heart upon your lips
    I may hear through the kiss.
    Quite a kiss, for sure.

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