I want to be kissed with a song
With beauty and let it be long
That dawn can curl her eyes that peek
For she hids much more if we shall seek
I must know where the rain truely drips
Not upon the floras but where in my heart
To know how love likes to be kissed
To hear the song of a beautiful kiss
Pick out a song and make it your new
I want your kiss to be my true
Write your heart upon your lips
So I may hear all through the kiss
In a list
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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your words of love flow as the song of a kiss. success in the contest.
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Yes, such a romantic, simple and captivating piece...Write your heart upon your lips very enchanting. Great job.
Candy
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So enchanting and filled with romance~So may I hear all through the kiss...sighs...I want one!.Where did you get yours?


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Such great poetry dedicated to one single kiss. It's enchanting and full of desire. Great write! Don't read many poems about the beauty of a kiss.
Miss Marie
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nice
i loved the line write your heart upon your lips
I may hear through the kiss.
Quite a kiss, for sure.



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