Can you hate this sunlight,
Can you hate the world?
Can you hate every morning,
that has unfurled?
Can you try to hate every baby
in it's crib?
Can you hate the mental girl,
eating spagetti with a bib?
Can you hate me anymore?
Can you hate that kitten,
you killed last night?
Can you hate that kitchen,
where you saw them fight?
Can you hate this world,
and everything in it?
Can you hate your life,
and wish to end it?
Can you hate me anymore?
Can you hate what happened,
that snowy evening?
Can hate me too,
is "you and me" ending?
Can you hate my life,
and yours in turn?
Can you light me on fire,
and watch me burn?
Can you hate me anymore?
Everytime you hate me,
you hate this poor world.
No matter how little,
it still has a price.
So take back those words,
you hurled.
Apologize and make nice.
Because one day,
you will see,
one day,
you'll be just like me.
A contest entry
- FED UP WITH DISCRIMINATION!!! by LovelyLauren.
37500 points, ended March 17, 65 entries
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Comments
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I really like this, it seems that some people can hate everything in this world and somehow justify it all. I know someone like that but I won't go into it. This is very emotional and wonderfully writen.
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disturbing
The imagery in this gave me chills, and disturbed me quite a bit to say the least, and that is good because it fits so beautifully with what I am looking for. Excellent...though cringe-inducing...poem.
Lauren
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