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Stream


Obscurity is
          known to
                tranquil streams
                              frosted by
                                    winter’s breath.

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  • Shelby K
    July 3, 2009
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    very nice poem. thanks for entering and good luck.


  • cup-a-joe silver member
    July 2, 2009
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    ~frosted by
    winter’s breath~~ so refreshing this hot day.
    Nice poem.
    Joe

  • Virgoan silver member
    September 10, 2007

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    Love the transitioning thoughts! Brilliant!

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • NoWayJo
    September 7, 2007

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    I really like this poem. It works in every word and detail and even to lay-out itself of a froze-over stream.

    Good writing and best wishes to you in the contest!

    Jo


  • Dragonsong silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    I love the deeply discriptive quality of this write, you have captures so much in so few words...
    Good luck in the contest

    Dragonsong

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