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The stillness of my sanity,
Calm is the wind in this storm
Lowly I wait, stillness
Soon, so close now
The heartbeat would race.

Crashes and rolling thunder,
Winter's icy deception
The circling hawk
Hand heart and tears
Slowly I disbelieve it.

Lapping and dwelling to you,
Beating and pumemling
Lost dreams so tender
As cycle starts to wane
Arm outstretched would shake.

Stillness calls my delirium
Bowed head I watch you
Step closer, no difference
Moments lost were nothing
No time passed but a second.

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  • Centri
    September 24, 2007
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    good, i beleive this to speak of a love so fragile, that even if it lasted a damned good time, when it was over, the time in which it lasted was very small.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    September 18, 2007
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    FANTASTIC

    this is a wonderful write from you tonight. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future and wish you luck in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie