Rendering
showers of candies
Eloquently scribed
notes of endearment
Soft eyes twinkling,
mentally dimming light
Scents of jasmine,
mirth saturating by storm
Becoming human pillow,
symbol of security
Unlocked doors
opened just because
Hands clasped,
warming heart and soul
Fingers caress,
concerting against skin
Lulling
body’s rebellion
Her love
Blossoms
In a list
A contest entry
- 50 words by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 16, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Word count = 50
Words required = 50
The way you put the lines and it being able to stand alone is excellent. There are so many beautiful lines that it is really hard for me to choose a favorite.
There is a voice within this write. Just Beautiful!
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Keep writing fellow poet.
>>>VIRGOAN
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Your poetry forever makes me sigh. You have a way with imagery that is matched by very few on this site. The cadence and flow is brilliantly paced. This is a sure winner in my book dear friend. Yes, "her love blossoms", perfect way to end the poem. I wish you the best in this challenge.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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This is beautiful, your stanzas are spare, presenting only the essential core, but the word choices are incredibly rich and descriptive. Good luck in the contest!
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i like the way you write, i don't see any poet write like you, you have a way of making these words speak, it just write very beautifuly.
great job good luck in the contest.
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oh how beautifully you have penned this poem, true angelic poem just loved it good luck in the contest
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