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Why?

Birds can fly,
Why can’t I,
Let me think,
Why?

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  • Virgoan
    September 10, 2007

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    I like the realization and the humour rendered in your 10 words. Nicely done.

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck

    >>>VIRGOAN

  • Anybodys-guess
    September 9, 2007
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    Funny...Later...AG


  • rhondasail
    September 8, 2007

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    Written with a great logical mind...I like the line, 'let me think'...lol...well done, in ten words...good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda


  • poetryality silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    A swell little ditty here poet. I fly in my dreams often. I even get the sense of soaring when I read about flying. I too wonder why people can't fly. Maybe because we have no feathers and or wings. LOL Great! I wish you the best in the contest.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • individuality gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    well in the mind we can fly if we wish to, imagination's wings can be spread wide, a good piece


  • starlock
    September 3, 2007
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    Sweet, short and good.
    Keep up the good luck,
    starlockxx

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