Fire burning
inside
consumes,
the world
with love's
purest flame.
A contest entry
- 10 words by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with the logic you penned with the word passion. Excellent poem in 10 words.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck
>>>VIRGOAN
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This is enrapturing. Oh my, how pure, and mellow. This poem made me sigh. Beautifully written! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Oh this is wonderful. Amazing what can be said in so few words isn't it? Lovely job on this. Good luck in the contest my friend
~Lyrical
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I really like this one a lot, but I think the comma after consumes needs to be moved to after world, unless I'm reading it wrong. Last line is great! Best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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wonderful
this is a very powerful piece, i love the empahsis on this flame being the worlds purest, hinting there are others without nessecarily staing there are. lovely write, best of luck in the contest
lucy
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Hot!! (pun intended) Nice touch to this one
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