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Aged of Aquarious

They called us "hippies" or
"flower child' or 'freaks'
we turned on tuned in and dropped out
sought peace in socialistic communes

Ours was Woodstock, the Monterey Popps
and the Concert at Bangladesh,
the musical prose of Jim Morrison
The Moody Blues and Carlos Santana

From states of 'high' awareness
there came the dawn of quantum---
thought, philosophy and science;
Huxley, Hawkins, Sagan, the internet and more

We went straight, followed Bill
adapted his 12-steps to all addictions
and the many manifestations of depression
For 'pot-heads' we did a lot of good

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 28
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    Very good write here

    I often wondered though if they had crack back then would you have fared the same .I know there was LSD and I have seen what it has done to some . It is the human way to try to fix whats broken often through drugs sad it is for it makes them lose all they had that was left and often their life .


    • plainoljoe
      March 28
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      A PHD tried to fix me with drugs and took away most of my free will in doing so. By the grace of God I recognized what was happening and why and weened myself from heavy doses lithium. When I explained my overall improvement to a more learned Psych, he began to take his other patients off the drug and quit prescribing it altogether

      Joe

  • patrick20traveler
    February 16
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    Good write. I'm sorry, but I don't remember the 60s at all and my memories of the 70s are sort of fading in and out. You say there was music?

  • grm
    October 8, 2008

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    i remember being pulled over by the cops in downtown Chicago when me and my buddies went to see the opening of the Bangladesh Concert movie.
    in our panic, i popped the last 2 joints we had in my mouth to swallow them before we got busted.
    i went through the cop stop, the drive to find parking, the walk to the theater, and was a 1/4 of the way into the flick before i was able to swallow it all. lol

    not a real good idea to chew weeds when you have severe dry-mouth


    and don't even ask me about Kickapoo Creek Rock Festival, where i discovered Orange Barrels


    thanks for this great entry and the tale of yesteryear


    • plainoljoe
      October 9, 2008
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      grm, whether smoked of force fed to chew, a buzzzz is still a buzzzzz and cotton mouth always follows. Glad you made it safely to one of the best concerts of the century.

      Joe


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 7, 2008

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    "From states of 'high' awareness"

    I liked the word play there...perhaps the emphasis is more on "high" than awareness, lol ! This poem has a very authentic voice about it and I liked the transition from the hippy days to "internet days" - wow, yes, the world did change. And to think that many of today's "high society" where "pot-heads"...makes one think!

    Nice work here - thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


    • plainoljoe
      October 7, 2008
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      Nicolette, true sometimes our 'Highs' were greater than our 'awareness'. Pot was cheap and easily attained and if caught, was a misdemeanor up to pound or more. As for Aldous Huxely, greatest essayist of the 20th century, his gig was peyote and LSD. And more than likely, Carl Sagan droppped a hit or two and burned a few 'fat ones' along the way.


      These days, I'm eleven years clean, not thanks to Bill but to God. Enough was enough and at the age of 51, I did my last hit of acid.

      Joe

  • Bob Fox
    September 7, 2008
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    Lol

    As one born into those times I must say I traveled a different, or the other, path.the streets of Brooklyn and the draft did seem to make my life just a little differnt from the average hippie. But oh the music of those times was truly the greatest. Another gem though.


    • plainoljoe
      September 7, 2008
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      Bob, I went to enlist and wound 1-Y, so I became one of the many drug dazed. And I agree, the music was the best of the entire 20th century

      Joe


  • Dark Otter
    March 25, 2008
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    Sometimes you write

    the things that I should have written. I'm 10 years clean and sober and active in AA. I am envious that you wrote that piece. Well done.


    • plainoljoe
      March 25, 2008
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      Amazira, the movements of the 60's and 70's drew a lot of bad press. However, we made a very positive impact on the future we now live

      Joe


  • rollingzen
    August 31, 2007
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    ah, nostalgia just isn't what it used to be....


  • Myjoy gold member
    August 31, 2007

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    great read, you know I don't think really that it matter what you do or put within your body, it's how you live your life, love, and befreind that matters the most. Do what you will to invision the future. Well done.

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