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She's The One.

A sneaky smile teases my sighing lips
As milky skin trembles beneath my fingertips,
My faithful weapon waits under the bed
To coax the filthy secrets I create in my head.
The only one who knows how to do it just right
‘She’ keeps me satisfied all through the night.
I slip her from below the silky sheets
She feels so hard and tastes so sweet,
As I take her into my moaning lips
Then guide her to my grinding hips.
My flower opens for her perfect kiss
I whimper as she takes me, into bliss.
A final thrust and a last rush of heat
And once more she’s left me in quiet defeat…

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  • FailedLove
    June 4
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    Wow,

    I Loved This!
    It Went So Good Together


  • misskitty
    May 31

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    fantastic

    Thid I'd defintily written!! Ooo sooo sweet!! Pure and heatful!! Adore the tactfull taste in this write..not to over whelming!:-)


  • Swtpoetryman
    December 25, 2008

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    A WLD AND WET SHOW, INDEED!

    I enjoyed the show from your closet! Let me say that your pussy and clit are very juicy - to say the least - and would make a fine feast for any woman or man - and BABY it tasted OH SO GOOD for I gave it a lick while you were sleeping and sucked your toy, and licked your panties while jerking off after you had fallen asleep! Thanks for entering my contest with the sweet and sensual piece.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • AngelsDemise
    September 1, 2007
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    so beautifully written

  • Griswold gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Nicely done for the contest indeed, sensual but not trashy just as stated in the contest rules, good job...Scott

  • Kiyoshi Kei
    August 31, 2007
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    Great write, without being too 'in your face' !! Very nice job.


  • MothandRust
    August 31, 2007

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    There was so much 'right' about that write that I don't know where to begin. I loved it, and it had a great climax.

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