Moonlight again
Concealed by dark prodding clouds
Allow me, be bare
Reveal my yearning within, without
Hungry desires
pull those strings in me tonight
And I'm flying (yet again)
Crazed, rushed, hurriedly (mad)
..towards the light in me,
embracing instinctively
(this destroying darkness within me..)
I fly towards you hurriedly
Oh light of old desires
(and the darkness of my destruction..)
Just one more time.......
Just one more time...
Towards you I come-
to be joined
Become.
Just one more time!!
(And I unbecome...)
Author notes
This poem is based on this picture:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2365274
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by Soulful Woman.
1000 points, ended September 2, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sounds as if yearn has become despair.
In the turmoil of a mad love, hearts can be crushed so easily.
I like the strong effect of your words, and the pace of the poem enhanced it.
A very good write to that contest picture.
Lots of hugs to you
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Thanx Mari you're the best
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nice... very nice... i love the look of the page too ... my fav line... "I fly towards you hurriedly
Oh light of old desires"
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Thanx Hitesh.. you should click here and check the real picture for which this was written-
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2365274
Thanx again
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Outstanding work...Thank you for your entry and good luck
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Thank you Dear Soulful Woman
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