curves stir up feverish desire,
breathless anticipation,
contact merges contrast
passion ignites a sizzle,
feverish strokes
evoke hushed gasps;
another, another and another
blinding pleasure
savoured till well spent,
in clasped spasms
quiver and feebly quiver..
A contest entry
- Quickie Drive Me Wild by WillAlwaysLove.
700 points, ended September 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PICTURE INSPIRED *adult content * by ennovy.
700 points, ended November 8, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice
Well done. Good content. It's like a teapot that's on the boil, it sizzles and sizzles until it steams! This is one steamy poem by the time you reach the end. I like it. Walt.
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This very tastefully written and I like the metaphors you used in the poem. Thanks for entering...
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Great write, thank you for entering, good luck!
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