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makeshift kumquats

my head is like a kumquat
it's allways moving on
it crashes into needs
and wants to stay too long

it tells us that i love it
though i know it is a lie
something up worth giving
cause i'm not that kinda guy

armadillic dinosaurs
of never ending pain
crash into eachother
as i roll around in brain

thoughts of twisting metal
and lilac woven lies
i put my hands upon your
and reach into the skies

if you want to kiss me
then don't do it on the lips
cause i see you talking
and want to rock your hips

the prozac keeps me mellow
so the demons don't come here
knocks me to a coma
when i mix it with some beer

the mayor is a stupid
he didn't get my vote
but if it was an island
i would leave him on the boat

masquerading zombies put on
twenty dollar hats
you look like me pudgy
like a fluffy little cats

Author notes

i could potentiallly combine this with the other one about prozac and fifty gallon smiles or whatever.

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  • draagyn
    August 31, 2007

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    'always'... haha. other than that it was delightfully confusing and amusing all at the same time... can't wait for VH to start rockin'!!


  • ShInE45DoWn
    August 31, 2007
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    Another VH hit, mybro. <3


  • Nature Song silver member
    August 31, 2007

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    I like the part of the mayor didn't get my vote, and if it were on an island I'd leave him on the boat! Wonderfully funny poem...full of twists and ironic statements of the mind! ~Sie