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noboys real

i walk through hem
endless masses of
sheep
robots
illussions
i reach out to touch one
and they
shatter
collapse
vanish
i give a scream
unheard but for myself
and i stop to wonder
whats wrong with them
and finally
whats wrong with me

i need to stop writing crap

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  • OpenBook.
    November 27, 2008
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    Thats some good crap...

    I love this poem, it's quite profound


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    August 31, 2007
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    wow great poem loved it and it is so not crap my stuff is below crap XD


  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 31, 2007
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    its not crap baby
    i like it
    good job